|Reviews for Lillian|
| BlaznFangurl chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
It is very interesting for a start.
| MidnightSeaNymph chapter 14 . 10/12/2008
er... That was an interesting end? Does that have it's own story?
The only complaint (or perhaps, more appropriately, constructive criticism) I have is that the story moved very fast. It was almost surreal.
| mystic.fox chapter 14 . 9/21/2008
Oh wow, did not expect that to happen in the end. This was a good story and I enjoyed it :)
| mystic.fox chapter 8 . 8/20/2008
I hope Josiah finds her soon because he seems like he is truly in love with Lillian. Update soon.
| Myownvice chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
cute, i like where this is going
| write-the-world chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
I really like this story so far. Your style of writing is great; the descriptions (of the town and of Lillian) are awesome; the dynamics between Lillian and Joseph are perfect. I also love Joseph's voice; he's an interesting narrarator so far. I'll definitely be reading more, so please update soon.
| J.S. Halloway chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
You are a decent writer, but I can't help but think that the storyline is stale and the dialogue is quite trite.
I think you would be more successfull if you wrote something more interesting that called for great description.(for you describe things quite lovely.)