Reviews for Rachel Joy
wynative02 chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Excellent!
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Short. Powerful. Passionate. Compassionate. Emotional. I loved it.

Peace.
Awesome Albino chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Wow...that is really sad! But the poem was really strong. I think you're a good writer because you made the reader feel the emotion that you wanted them to feel, sadness. It's a powerful poem!
Valarie Needham chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Yes, Rachel's death was not in vain. Very good writing and keep up the good work!

Dessi
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
sad:( but well written