oh no, why did he lie and tell her he didn't love her! I mean that's the only answer. But I still love Reed despite this mess up.

I think they should both stop stop the affair. If they were to both get divorces that'd be fine if they continued, but not if they're still married to other people.

update soon... Please? )

-xxstarryeyedxx

And I was starting to think that the Reed and Andrea couple was all a happy, lovey dovey, perfect relationship. Wow for drama. XD

Oh and I think that Charlie and Sarah should stay in an affair, but then they get busted by their spouses. They can burn in Hell! Kidding lol. :P

So I absolutely LOVE this story. It's uncannily like the book I'm trying to get published at the moment...crazy, huh? So anyways, I love the title, too- that's what actually caught my eye. I'm kinda a Foo Fighters fan... If that's what you were going for. But please keep it up! I love how well-written this is. And I liked this chapter, too. This could totally pass for a book. Keep going!

THIS STORY WAS AMAZING !

update soon please

Omg, poor Andrea! Great story, awesome chapter, really...

I do think Charlie and Sarah should remain as an affair... bur maybe there should be little more drama. Like next chapter it could be revealed that Charlie got drunk at the club and cheated on Sarah...? Just a simple suggestion.

the ending of ch. 19 was well done. I don't mean in the fact that he left, but what was written was more life like (not cliche (he suddenly says her loves her or something).

excellent job on describing Andrea's feelings, showing her confusion and desire throughout the whole chapter.

as a reader i would love to see a bit of the next chapter from Reed's point of view now that Andrea has spoken her mind. or even compare and contrast from Reed's point of view examine how his feelings have changed through chapter 19.

again... i'd like more description however, at times the lack of description is helpful as it gives serious focus to character interaction.

as for charlie and sarah... they should stay together. unless one of them suddenly is found out or grows a conscience (people having an affair don't really have a reason to break up otherwise) however, if you really want create chaos in reed's world have them break up with one of them possibly no longer working for him.

this chapter was definately a filler but it had excellent character elaboration which made it worthwhile.

the brother's commentary about Reed loving her really helped pull the story together.

again, i wish there would be more description ... however, you updated very quickly (so absolutely no whining here!) :)

Poor Andrea /: Charlie and Sarah definitely need to be caught by their spouses.

Aww ... idiot. Reed, not Andy. I appreciate her decision to not accept less, although I personally would expect more ... like a ring. But for the purposes of the story, I think the fact that she won't simply sleep around shows growth.

As for the question, Sarah and Charlie should get caught IMHO. More drama. Whether they would stay together after being caught, who can say, but it would be better at least if their spouses knew and had the opportunity to spit in their faces if they so desired.

How dare he! Sigh, I'm disappointed in him right now. And I think Charlie and Sarah should get what's coming to them and get caught by their spouses :)

this is really good story i love it whenn she and charlie get into fights

YES charlie and sarah should remain an affair. lol.

Loved it, update soon!

That was...severely annoying? xD But I suppose it had to happen, right? By the way, Buster's adorable

Aw, thats upsetting. Poor Andrea. Ive just began to read this today, probably should be preparing for a Uni interview but ah, what the heck.. FP anyday :) ... really great story, and proper well written too! Cant wait to find out what happens next (Y) x