Reviews for No Heaven without Hell
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
What I really really like about this piece is that the line that is the title wasn't included in the poem. It added so much to it, where you'd almost expect it to take away. Your choice of words was amazing, and just the heart behind it. Officially the most beautiful rhyming piece I've ever read, nothing about it seemed ameature, or as if you were filling in the rhyming blanks with irrelevant words, which added to the whole thing SO much. It was thought out, but still seemed so raw.

Well done, seriously amazing writing.
jessnutsss chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Beautifully written. I almost cried :(
All Over You chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
ooh i liked this.

for some reason, i can relate to it.
futureauthor852 chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
WOW. It was short, but something about it... that was good. Great Job!
Hopelessly Cliche chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Aw, that was beautiful. I love the line 'The light is blinding white and hot', it's just really...striking, somehow. My mind works weirdly. I'm not into poems much, but I'm glad I read this one because it's great, powerful too! D


awillowdeeplyscarred chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
That was really good! It had a good rythum and words. And I just like poetry in general _

x lauren
fallingWish chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
I liked it.

It threw me off for a bit there when it suddenly stopped rhyming though.
Suppy chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
I liked it, short but good. (:

Although... when it stopped rhyming it threw me off a bit.

Nonetheless, beautiful work.

Keep it up! (:

-Nikki ( )
misery sister chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I thought it was nice and simple - although all of a sudden, it stopped rhyming, which sort of threw me off.
Inanga chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Oh hiya midge!

who might you be ;)

this is a great poem!

you are a talented writer!


~thou who shall change thou pen name soon

storyofagirl ox chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
aw. thats really good. you did a really good job (:

write more.

p.s. i just released my first chapter of my new story " letting go", its a romance. i hope you can check it out sometime.
il capitano chapter 1 . 8/14/2008

go nikki

nice work

i like the comparisions and imagery used

really nice