Finish .

It's great!

wish to read more .

I LOVE this story! I can't wait to read more; it is so cute!

KAWAII!

The little one is completely adorable. GO SHOTA! Kyaah!

-Emi

Oh, cool! XD Am I a pervert if I say I enjoyed reading this? lol, no wait, I'd already established that I was one so I don't even know why I'm rhetorically asking. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Update soon!

i thought it was so cute and should write more stories that are longer with those two in it. please it would make me very happy.

Wow, that was really cute! It reminds me of Strawberry lemonade, but it's a little different. Anyway, they're both awesome! The hell/school thing made me laugh" Paean and Epicure are sweet together. They should have monkey-sex. Just a suggestion...

Anyway, looking forward to an update!

Confetti Kitty

(jumps up and down excitedly) Yayness! You published it! Word for word too! (fangirl squees)

That was awesome...a little short(hey who am I to say if a story's short), but awesome.

Like I promised, I'm the first reviewer *yays* and here's what I have to say (plz don't kill me because of my suggestions/comments...coolbeans?):

-When the older brother, Epicure, is thinking...could you set it in italics? That sometimes makes it easier for people to understand that he's thinking and not talking to himself...then that would be creepy.

-'Didn't he have to go to hell, er, school tomorrow?' that would probably be my favorite line out of the whole story! ROTFLMAO! Very witty.

-Do they attend the same school...just wanna know?

-And when are you gonna update...I can't wait forever...Zetsubousta! Then I'd be in a deep dispair.

Keep up the Good Work, I'm chearing for you guys all the way up from the nosebleed section!

Peace, Love, and the Joys of Living

-Alexander Rowe

P.S. thanks for the dedication and one more thing...is it that convincing that I'm a guy?