|Reviews for Poetic Ramblings|
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
not your forte? certainly not your foible.
line 1: isn't it valuable for poets how english requires either "word trembles" or "words tremble"? your choice between the two caught me first here, and the remainder of the stanza emphasizes the point of the poet suspended in the nether region of the uncomposed possible...carried successively successionally into the second stanza...
is now a lyric of questionable philosophy
poet: dip thy pen into the wells if heisenbergian improbability and take on the universe on/in your own terms!
| Ellesmere chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
This is definitely a good start. Your first stanza seems like it could use some light editing. You have a talent for writing.
| a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
You're amazing. This is definitely one of my favs. Welcome back! )