|Reviews for bruise|
| Thoughtful Silence chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
This was good. The tone in it was honest, and realistic. The ending was blunt, and not hidden behind metaphors or pretty imagery, which was good.
I didn't 'get' the phrase "colourful dream" and I didn't like the word "of" having its own line... seemed a bit outta place.
Anyways, keep up the good work.
| Isca chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Simple, but honest and true. I liked the fierce sense of emotion in this piece.