Reviews for With My Life As in Trusting
Hate to be a downer chapter 15 . 4/29/2011
You really need to edit this. Really. The grammar is okay, but the plot and quality of writing are not. At all.

I would take this down while you edit. That way, no innocent readers have to go through the torture that is this story.

Sorry for being mean: I usually try to leave a compliment on my reviews but I couldn't think of anything.
Siva-Ryuu chapter 15 . 12/25/2009
:)) nice story
ChristianAngel01 chapter 15 . 10/10/2009
what! whoa I am shocked! Great story :D AWESOME!
Fanboy's Raven chapter 15 . 4/16/2009
if u ever get bored, rewrite this in more detail and extend things.

everything happens a bit too quickly.

and at the start, when she enters the shop/store, sludge is the cashier in his early twenties?

and the other two "customers" in the shop, no mention of their age/appearence etc, even though they become fairly important characters?

and sludge also appeared to be older then he is later on...

it's a good plot, cliche at times, but a good read.

be careful of spelling mistakes and/or grammar...

yeah my main point is extend it more, and try to build images of the characters.
horns holding my halo chapter 9 . 11/25/2008
Lol she has two kids already after just getting married.
Twist Their Emotions chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Interesting.
Fanboy's Raven chapter 8 . 11/19/2008
More!

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Annabel Wynters chapter 4 . 9/2/2008
times? Do tell! Love this story very awesome!
Lady Armand chapter 2 . 8/15/2008
Can't wait for more.