|Reviews for Looking For Proof|
| Thoughtful Silence chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I liked the ambiguity of this. I mean, there is a multitude of varying ways to interpret this, which I like to see in a poem on occasion. One thing though, in a haiku it isn't the best move to repeat a word... let alone two. Meh.
Anyways, keep up the good work.