I'd hate you more for making an authors note, but since you already told me what was going to happen, i dont hate you as much...i still got excited when i saw another chapter...please update soon, you said you have half of it done, hurry up with the other half, before i die. And I actually did (being you best friend) go through and reread the other ones. They were really good...i love how you took people we know and made them characters, Vanessa's still my favorite. I love how you added more things...and is my voice high pitched? you might have changed it for the story, but ive been told alot that my voice is high pitched verging on sqeaky...I would hate for my voice to be sqeaky...

Anyway,

Love you,

Ams

YOU ROCK! This one made me laugh out loud. The next time someone hogs the chips or snacks would be called a booty hog, if it wasn't for the fact that it will more or likely be me...oh well. I can totally see me jumping on someones back...actually ive done that before...wait i do that all the time to you...oh well.

That was a great chapter...i like how el and zack are getting closer...

Hmm...I wonder what will happen next...Hm?

AH! ! ! You actualy made an Author's note into a chapter! HOW DARE YOU! GR! Iag, i GUESS i'll let it slide ;) update a REAL chapter before i get excited ok? lyb!

Aw! such a cute chapter! I really like it. The memories in the tree house was classic and very well done. Hmm... El drunk... HA! yup halarious sight.

Okay, that's fine, I was expecting another chapter, but I can live with the suspense (cliff hangers are nice). And it was smart of you to go back through and edit them, I'd still like to go through at least that last chapter had some missed words and typos that I'd like to fix whenever I have some free time that I don't want to spend on my own writing. Also, you can put those cool chapter titles in the same place where you put "Author's Note" for this chapter when you were submitting the chapter. You can do this by 1) logging in, 2) putting your mouse over "Publish", 3) clicking on "My Stories", 4) Clicking on "Heartbreak", 5) Clicking on Content/Chapters, 6) then clicking on "edit" next to a specific chapter, 7) then typing in the title for that chapter. But you don't have to do that if you don't want to.

Well I hope you had a Merry Christmas and that you have a great year!

Write on!

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! It was so romantic without taking away from the regular plot. I have to read the next chapter NOW (that's why its a short review)!

This is absolutely an amazing story! It sounds so hokey, but I truly aspire to write something of this caliber. Great job! Please keep up the good work.

SORRY! I was only half-way through my review when I accidentally submitted the review!

So what I was going to say was that I really liked the direction you took this chapter in, its always nice to add another facet to the story like you did here, you made the story about more than just the pranks. And I really think that bring El's mom was great choice!

Write on!

Yeah, I guess it has been a while since you last updated, and the biggest problem with that is that your readers will start to forget some of the smaller parts of the plot and get confused when they get to read the next chapter, but this chapter was a nice chapter to remind me of anything I'd forgotten anyway, so no harm no foul.

WOOT WOOT! I love seeing that little e-mail that says that you posted another chapter! It's the best. SO, I love the picture of her and Zack, what a GREAT idea! I mean, only brilliant people can come up with THAT *cough cough* ) I like where it's heading, and I think your doing a great job of setting the story. Your not making it only big events or very few events st all, its a great blend. It flows well and is easy to read. so pretty much, all you have to do is post ANOTHER chapter, then ANOTHER, until it's sorta finished. THEN! you can work on the sequal!

Ni-ice. Ness is my favorite...yeah no change there...

Can you imagine how embarrising that would be? Maybe we should do that to iBoy...that'd be kinda funny...only id end up getting caught...

Hah,

Lovesya,

Shelby

That was another great chapter! And don't worry about taking too long to update or the grammatical errors. Pretty much as long as you update within a month or two, I doubt that anyone will mind. And grammatical errors happen and we all know how to read through them because we all make them! Eventually when I have more time, if you want me to, I'll go through each chapter and fix those things for ya. But DEFINITELY, another quality chapter! GREAT JOB!

Write on!

I really like how the prank turned out. Alot better when you stretched out the moment of the prank, I mean really! We've all been waiting for it! I must say: it was very good, update sooner, and I REALLY can't wait for the next prank, *wink wink*

Lovely chap-cher. Fanstastic! Bravo!

NEED MORE ETHAN!

over and out.

your bestest friend in the whole wide world, who you push alot,

Ams

YAY! You posted. I don't think that I've mentioned this before, but you are really good at transitioning between characters. You can easily go from El to Page without it being confusing, GOOD JOB! NOW! All you have to do is get that prank going :)