Reviews for Dream of Life
Lime-Cat chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I like this piece because it has a nice rhythm and tone.

I was able to get a brief image of a person gradually picking up speed and running in a sprint at the end from this poem because of the pace - this was pretty neat.

Although, I do have a strong dislike for the lack of punctuation and capitalization in this poem - it takes away from the overall structure that a poem is supposed to have. The first three lines seem like a quote to me, so if it is, consider italicizing them or format them in some way to indicate they are quotes?

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