Reviews for If I Could
Lime-Cat chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Again, I think this is a pre-poem that has the potential to be expanded upon. You currently have a single thought, more like a ponder, which doesn't give the reader much to work with.

I was frustrated that I couldn't make anything of this general thought - it's too vague and there's barely any depth to this.

I liked that this poem made me wonder for just a brief moment of all the instances this would have been applicable in my life, but that was just it - it was brief and the feelings, short-lived.

I don't see why this is classified as angst when there's nothing but a thought for the content. I think this better belongs in just the General category, unless you can expand this into a General/Angst poem - which I'm sure you can.

-silv3rdr34ms

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