Reviews for Fall Out
Mary Cate chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
I loved this! It felt genuine,and you got a feel for the speaker in such a short time. This is definitely a fave!
Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
You did an awesome job of making this character relatable in such a short span of time. That's wonderful. And sadly, I'm sure that this situation is very real and happens far too often than it should.

Really well done. It's the perfect length, and I'm sure I'll be remembering it for a long time.

Great work. :)

- Koki
Dotyky chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Very thought-provoking, I really empathised with this person ;)