I loved this! It felt genuine,and you got a feel for the speaker in such a short time. This is definitely a fave!

You did an awesome job of making this character relatable in such a short span of time. That's wonderful. And sadly, I'm sure that this situation is very real and happens far too often than it should.

Really well done. It's the perfect length, and I'm sure I'll be remembering it for a long time.

Great work. :)

- Koki

Very thought-provoking, I really empathised with this person ;)