Reviews for Flower
Ribbon on the Rose chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
so few words, but so much meaning... fantastic job!
Luna Turner chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
Mm... It certainly makes sense. I love how you compared a man without God to a flower without roots. Because it's such a good comparison, really.

You're right, it was very short.

But it had so much emotion!

I don't have any criticisms.

~Luna Turner
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Simple but nice. Good job, you have more talent than you know. :D
fluidwriter chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Wow...this is a very short poem but, yet, so powerful. I loved the last part when you'd said ''A man without God, will surely die'' I don't know why, but I do. Keep up the good work.
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Wow.. this was truly a surprise - a good one :D

Loved it, and it's so true too!

Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
so simple

so straight forward

so pretty.


TheBeautyOfTheGrave chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Very good. Very true. Very short. I like it

God Bless You

~Holli x