Reviews for Pessimism
Yorik chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I loved those lines - "The lights still run / Away, to where?"
Kyrii chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Pounds and clouds don't rhyme, and neither do was and cause.
MetalCloud chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to this, but I'm here now!

Anyway, I liked this poem. I'm impressed by the rhyming, because I can't rhyme to save my life. It flowed well, and had good rhythm.
ville de diable chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
I really dig this.
Eli the Strange chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
I really like the way this one sounded! It almost sounded like a pantoum at first, but I'm glad it isn't (even though that would be amazingly cool) because the word choice is excellent
HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
I loved the rhyming scheme on this. The way you kept it rhyming, but didn't force it makes for a nice moving poem. I also like how you take the 2nd line of the 1st verse for the beginning of the 2nd, and so on. It creates a nice together feel and wraps up the poem well at the end.
Inkspilled chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Very rhythmic and fitted.

I like how it starts with a simple thing, leading off to bigger things. Starting from sadness, to deeper depression.

Very nice and unique, I liked reading it. :)