Reviews for House of Wolves
marijee chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
That was an epic first chapter! Vee and her pack have gone through a lot of horrors. Why does the other pack...the Kire hate this pack so much. Oh and what is going to happen to Vee now? Enjoyed.
BananaPoo chapter 9 . 4/2/2011
EPHRAIM IS SO RIGHT. omg. she is getting SO annoying. I don't know, her actions just bug me so much.

and all she does is complain about her life and cry. ._. i hope she starts pissing me off less or i'm going to throw something at my computer screen!
wtfwaswrongwithteenme chapter 55 . 3/19/2011
So first off I love the story way more than I thought I would. I feel though that the whole Uriel having a curse thing should have been hinted at from the beginning. It sort just popped up out of no where at the end and I was like wahh... I'm also a little curious about the whole 4 alphas and the hollow aspect of the story, you never really told us what it was. I get it's over in Germany and I'm assuming they're the ones who make the law and such but I'm not really sure. I think you have a great story here that has the potential to be even better. I hope to see more of your writing in the future )
AleceaSunshine chapter 55 . 3/18/2011
Loved the story. Though I have to admit right after the fight with Kire I cried. I was actually a little pissed that Cain had died we got that little ah moment with him and elizabeth and then he goes and gets killed / yeah it still ticks me off thinking about, either way the story was really good
Alex Sly chapter 55 . 3/18/2011
WOW! This story was by far one of the most structured story I have ever read on here and fan fiction. I believe that this story can be successfully published world wide. You put so much effort into the plot and all the characters have left their own personal mark in the story. In the end you wrapped up the story quite nicely. This exceptional piece of work that deserves a massive amount of attention. Job well done!
C.L Lily chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
C.L Lily chapter 55 . 3/17/2011
Wow, this story was really well characters were so well developed and the plot was meaningful and emotional!I can't wait for your sequel!
draco oblivion chapter 55 . 3/17/2011
Yay I can't wait to read the other installments :)
draco oblivion chapter 54 . 3/17/2011
Kire had some redeemable qualities in the end didn't he

It's sad the state that Uriel's in

Wow I feel really sorry for Nick, I always forget about him...

Vesper is kind of emo... and self obsessed, but that's what makes her interesting :)

Lol at the way she decided to leave the car XD

Wow Nick's back and he epically brought back Vesper. It would have been hilarious if Lucien had agreed to leave or the pack killed Nick and then Uriel was just left in the car...

Then after doing such a good deed he left without recieving a word of thanks. He's so cool :)

What why did Uriel tell him a bit and then just stop?

Yay Vesper's taking control but it kind of sounds like she was ignored...

Oh so the beast is gone, I didn't think that would happen

I don't think I've ever read a story that ended in sex before... just saying :P

Yeah well that story was epic, I loved all the characters the good and the bad aswell as the plot and the whole world you created. It was all beautifully done and I'm honoured to have read this, so thank you :)

I hope one day I'll be seeing this book in the shops so I can give it to everyone I know, even if they won't read it because they're lazy. :)
draco oblivion chapter 53 . 3/16/2011
I didn't expect Cameron to feel like that.

Aaw I feel sorry for Nick having to kill those people but he's not choosing wolves over his own people he's choosing one species over a bunch of murderers.

That was harsh of Ahren, acting like anyone who wouldn't give their life for another don't deserve respect. Not many people would be willing to do that.

Vesper really doesn't do much does she? Wha happened to the killer instinct of the wolf? She can't even use a gun or her claws when somones choking her

WHAT how could Camron have wolf kids I thought they needed to be wolf on both sides to be able to survive the change...

Yay Graham's killing hunters :) Too bad he died :(

I thought that it had to be done by that guy's uncle

why would Kire help Cameron? And why did Cameron then attack Kire instead of Uriel?

the Hollenhound wasn't as powerful as I thought it would be...

Aaw no Uriel's still has to fight the beast and now Leslie's appeared, IT'S A CLIFFHANGER! :)
draco oblivion chapter 52 . 3/15/2011
This is emotional, I really thought Vesper had somehow died... I reall hope Lucien and Derrik are ok as well...
draco oblivion chapter 51 . 3/15/2011
This was a funny chapter especially the fortune cookie bit and the fact Mason immediately knew it was Vesper who did something...

Lucien's really cool the way he's always so stubborn

NO the ending wasn't funny if anything happens to Lucien I'll cry... if only Vesper hadn't sent Lucien away
draco oblivion chapter 48 . 3/15/2011
That's sad he's giving up :( oh well...
draco oblivion chapter 47 . 3/15/2011
Epic! I didn't know that Uriel had a part in the death, I thought it was a coincidence that they attacked the pack he joined...
draco oblivion chapter 44 . 3/14/2011
Who would've thought she'd look to Kire as her protector
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