|Reviews for I Am An Angel|
| Ezio. The Sentinel chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Ah...it has been too long since I have read any of your works. I'm happy to say the reunion has once again cause my mind to swirl with thoughts and puzzles. That being said, on to the critique:
When I think of this "either or" scenario, two thoughts come to mind. The first, that there is always a middle ground, and no one is perfect. The second, perhaps it is not you who is half covered in grime, but the mirror. Interpretation varies widely, as does opinion. Find yourself a new mirror, and make sure IT'S surface is clean before you allow it to judge you.
Deepest respect and admiration,
| vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I like this poem a lot-it takes a feeling most of us has, and puts great visuals in to change it. I really, really like it. (:
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
damn. i would say this is pretty hot if it weren't so haunting.
i thought the beginning was a bit slow, but then again, i liked how it helped build up steadily to the climax (the last two stanzas)
the idea of this poem isn't anything new, but i like the twist with the mirror and the somewhat open-ended of the end. great job
thanks for your review from a while back :]
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
wow, very nice piece. I like it! Great work :)