Reviews for not a love poem
cupids.battlefield chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
I truly loved this. It was heartbreakingly personal yet easily relatable. Fantastic imagery in such a short poem. Well done.

this young lady chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
really original and easy to relate to. you've got the emotion of bitterness spot on, hating that you love the person.

its hard to write anything coherent when you're in love but you've managed it well. I like it.

Lizzy x
Isca chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
"Is this better now? Smaller pieces?" Full of angst. Good work! :)