|Reviews for Band Camp|
| PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
This was pretty good. If I were you to keep the flow going I would add again, again, after Ten. Just a suggestion though.
This was very different. I liked it though. Good job!
| hikari no sora chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
... can you pleaSE explain this? I liked the words in the poem and it had a good rhythm, but I just don't understand what you were trying to say.