Reviews for Ballad of the Broken
heart shaped box x3 chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
It was a nice poem. Though, it really could use some decent spacing, capitals and punctuation in the appropriate place. Especially since some of your punctuation in incorrect. Your word choices were nice. Though, your flow seemed kind of awkward in some places. Very original poem, but once again, it would be more readable if you used punctuation and capitals.

All in all, a nice write.

-Drea {heart shaped box}
Nicki BluIs chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Beautifully written. The there was a good use of verbs abd adjectives throughout. The pain was there but it was treated with delicacy. I think the "on" and "i" can be capitalized without breaking the flow but it is up to you. Good job.

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