Reviews for Bloodless: a Collaboration
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
this is really nice

your descriptions definitely paint a full scene. well done!

sometimes your choice in adjectives/adverbs seems either a little too strong or imposing to me, but that's just how i read it...i could point out specific ones if you want..idk

the whole idea of dying bloodlessly really hits home to me. my brother died bloodlessly. i never really got emotional over it though...but some people would, i guess.

it's really super(resist the urge to say duper) prose-work though. keep it up. :]