|Reviews for Bloodless: a Collaboration|
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
this is really nice
your descriptions definitely paint a full scene. well done!
sometimes your choice in adjectives/adverbs seems either a little too strong or imposing to me, but that's just how i read it...i could point out specific ones if you want..idk
the whole idea of dying bloodlessly really hits home to me. my brother died bloodlessly. i never really got emotional over it though...but some people would, i guess.
it's really super(resist the urge to say duper) prose-work though. keep it up. :]