|Reviews for Sleeping with the Enemy|
| Fiction.userx chapter 31 . 10/29
That's what I hate about love triangles, you are bound to feel bad for the other. Poor Cole. But a very very well written fic!
| Lyn chapter 1 . 7/3
| Charlotte Gardner YA chapter 1 . 3/20
Wow, this is a great opening chapter. The contract is the perfect excuse to push two people together. A great romance trope!
| Minable chapter 29 . 1/8
This really was an incredible story. Once I started reading, I just couldn't stop. However, the one thing that depresses me the most in a romance is a time jump. Joss just wasted SEVEN YEARS OF HER LIFE. And then the ending. No hate intended, but the ending is killing me. I mean, Cole. He's just, gone. Why? WHY? I've been rooting for him since the beginning and, just like a lot of other readers I can see that have expressed this in their reviews, Joss ending with Jack is just wrong. But although I hate it, I guess I can see why it's been written this way.
Seriously though, this story was great. It was very well written and I could see the quality developing as it went on. So, despite my dissatisfaction with the ending, thank you for an amazing read!
| Leftie issa Bae chapter 31 . 11/27/2016
amazing story but I think you should work on the ending.
Joss and Jack are cute together but I wanted Cole and joss.
| crazydaisyyy chapter 16 . 5/22/2016
I don't like her together with jack :( nooo go back to cole
| crazydaisyyy chapter 12 . 5/22/2016
loved this chapter
| Tahleah reader chapter 30 . 5/13/2016
I only read this chapter to see if Cole crashed the wedding. This is wrong! Immortal beloved, beethoven in the rain wrong! RED FLAGS - She doesn't know how to argue with Jack. She believes she must be perfect for the relationship to work. Literally stayed in the safe zone her entire life. Zero fun zone. The bakery? Is not HER full potential it's a degree of how far she's willing to create a whole world on one guy, believing that he's her only shot in love. Hence the whatever he taught me I will make my life's goal mentality. After 7 years together, AND THAT REACTION, no trust no honesty and no actual conversation?!
I'm still in shock that you altered these characters- Cole and Joss- core, because their truth was leading you to pity Jack. WTF does that mean? I'm reading this eight years later and I'm fucking pissed that it's still not fixed! They love each other, there's nothing that can't be said. She went to Cole after every altercation seeking his opinion. Feedback etc
This is one of the most beautifully drawn out stories I've read on here - and you made it a tragedy by neglecting the truth of your main character. The depth of love that Cole and Joss have, carried over those years. It never dissipated, only paused. Soulmates make mistakes in order to really find each other - they did a lot of that. And you kept her with the rebound?! Just because Cole didn't know that she didn't like apples? In order to counter act him knowing, innately, what she needed even after years of separation. Their connection is real and beneficial.
But it's swamped out for a nice mother figure she always wanted instead of the loving gritty relationship she HAS Will Cole? They fought against each other in the beginning, it should have ended with them fighting for one another. And you made them weak. That is awful beyond words.
Please 're-write the ending chapters.
| Catylia chapter 4 . 5/7/2016
The story is great . I wanted to read some love hate from a long tym. But then I see this
Seriously its good,great humor. But major holes. I mean why can't a god damn girl just be a little more serious about bring locked up in a mansion and people forcing her.? Seriously if my parents sighned a contract of me being there ,I would hate the whole family. And condom?who asks a girl to go to their son's room and have sex? Seriously ?and she didn't even protest?
| annayh44 chapter 30 . 11/15/2015
Dammit dammit dammit I hate this story I hate Jack the most God screw this Guy and I hate Joss the most in world...I just hate it million times no offence please you wrote great story but what shall I do...I want Cole to get love..dammit I want to cry cry cry so hard I didn't read the last two chapter just look at it..,I don't have power to read it...I hate you Joss you crazy woman slut whore ahhhhhhhh fuck off and I am sorry writer
| annayh44 chapter 27 . 11/15/2015
What was that? Please take out Jack from picture or I swear will start crying Yeah I know it will be horrible for Jack but I will cry huhuhu
| annayh44 chapter 26 . 11/15/2015
Hell No They are driving me insane ! Totally! I love them and I love Cole so much but its terrible how can Joss do to Guy who she had 7 years wasted and deeply in love...Joss you are screwed ! Cole hmm its not your mistake
| annayh44 chapter 24 . 11/15/2015
Cole yaaaaaaaaaa Idiot Evil hahaha he use Melody lol Awww Cole & Joss are so cuteeeee and Melody and Cole are so cuteee toooo,...thank God There's no long part of Jack conversation if he is ridiculously sweet I won't will be handle what I am gonna do to Cole xD But I love Cole..alot
| annayh44 chapter 23 . 11/15/2015
Now now COLE you jerk why did you kiss her Idiot...ahhhh I guess both Cole and Joss are screw up so they deserve eachother lol
| annayh44 chapter 20 . 11/15/2015
Jee in this chapter how much do I hate Joss. Like I want to chop off her head! Jack she got Guy now Cole can't leave him alone and go marry away with Jack aisssh my blood is boiling ! But if no drama no story