Reviews for Sleeping with the Enemy
mssarahadams057 chapter 1 . 4/12/2021
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
Katherine Queen chapter 2 . 10/25/2020
I could not read the entirety of this chapter, because I could not get through all of the curse words. For me, this book is mature, not teen, simply because of the cursing. In Hollywood, you only have to say the F-word twice to get an R-rating. This may not be mature regarding subject matter, but it is mature with all of the cursing. Sorry to say this, but it was fun while I it lasted.
Katherine Queen chapter 1 . 10/23/2020
I will be fair, I wasn't a fan of the cursing. But, beyond the dislike of the curse words, I thought that the first chapter showed some promise. Enough promise where I thought it worth reading another chapter in the near future. Maybe I'll read the next chapter pretty soon. I just hope that the cursing isn't as fluent as it was in this chapter. I do hope that I will be able to find out the woman's name that is in first person, but otherwise I like her very much. Again, not a fan of the cursing, hopefully she tones it down in the next chapter. Interesting start.
Otakuami chapter 30 . 4/23/2020
It was pretty good. I believe that Jack was a little too perfect though haha. Can't believe she got to be with the same guy when she was 17. So utterly cute.
Cole is like that love who is fiery and passionate but you know you can't be with because then it would have been a volatile relationship
Deepali chapter 5 . 3/26/2019
Idk why I'm re reading this book again and again
Guest chapter 29 . 2/6/2019
It was very well written story. But the main couple were complete bore.

You did what I think most authors do automatically. Make the second guy jerk just you can prop your chosen guy. Most authors do that to other girl. You know the designated bitch who ruined hero's life. I hate when that is done as it makes fool out of readers. There can be more than one interesting person beside leads in the story.

There was no insight to Cole's character though glimpses made him far more interesting. Giving him a real romance not with boring lead would have helped. It was only when Cole came into picture that story would show some life. I don't favor bad boys or anything but since the main character was such a limp dishrag I had to hook on someone else.
Guest chapter 26 . 1/17/2019
This story is so awesome
lynn kuzco chapter 1 . 11/23/2018
Good, gooder,goodest...kiddin, bt seriously nice start, badder than most
Ezabellaa chapter 29 . 9/2/2018
Okay so first of all I never ever reviewed on FP. I read them and that's it. But I hafta review this.
So I read the reviews and everyone is saying she should be with Cole. I agree.
All the entire thing was Joss's fault. It was she who slept with someone else when she knew she has someone other. Who loves her. It was totally entirely her fault. I feel bad for Cole. A lot. But it's better for him that she isn't with him.
Acie chapter 3 . 4/5/2018
This looks like a great story but I am, sadly, abandoning it because my inner grammar Nazi can't deal with the constant misuse of "you're" in place of "your". If you ever need someone to beta the story, I'd be happy to do it just so that your stories become easier on the eyes
gothXjock chapter 1 . 1/28/2018
This story drove me insane.I started reading it and I couldn't stop until I finished know the worst thing about my life is when I have exams only at that time I found amazing stories and this is one of the reason I can't focus ;p but trust me this story is one of the best stories I've ever read and everything is too perfect honestly but I seriously hate the ending.I mean she should be with could have Addison somehow but it broke my heart when Cole left.
Fiction.userx chapter 31 . 10/29/2017
That's what I hate about love triangles, you are bound to feel bad for the other. Poor Cole. But a very very well written fic!
Lyn chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
Love it
Charlotte Gardner YA chapter 1 . 3/20/2017
Wow, this is a great opening chapter. The contract is the perfect excuse to push two people together. A great romance trope!
Minable chapter 29 . 1/8/2017
This really was an incredible story. Once I started reading, I just couldn't stop. However, the one thing that depresses me the most in a romance is a time jump. Joss just wasted SEVEN YEARS OF HER LIFE. And then the ending. No hate intended, but the ending is killing me. I mean, Cole. He's just, gone. Why? WHY? I've been rooting for him since the beginning and, just like a lot of other readers I can see that have expressed this in their reviews, Joss ending with Jack is just wrong. But although I hate it, I guess I can see why it's been written this way.
Seriously though, this story was great. It was very well written and I could see the quality developing as it went on. So, despite my dissatisfaction with the ending, thank you for an amazing read!
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