I absolutely loved the story, it could have been prrof read more for simple typos, but overall really well written.

i'm an ENORMOUS Cole fan in Part 1, but that was for part 1...he was her huge teenage love, Jack was the best for her in the end. Cole just bugged me in part 2, too much angst. as much as i would have loved her to end up with cole...i think you made the right choice (pains me to say it but...)

thanks for the entertainment!

OMG. AWKWARD.

I love Joss and Jack. *Sighs* They're just so cute.

Lydia is getting more and more on my nerves.

"They think they can just go sticking their penises in whatever then want."

ROFL. AHAHAHAHAHA. FUNNIEST THING I'VE READ ALL DAY :P

LOL freaking hilarious :p

I sense a love triangle. :)

Man, Cole's mother is completely diabolical. :)

Aw :X :X :X Cole is so damn cute! Jack's ok, but I want Cole and Joss to be together !

This story is really nice. Love it ]

I'm gunna go read the next chapter ;) Ttuls.

lovelovelovelovelove. at first i totally loved cole. then i loved jack.t hen i loved cole again. then jack again. now i just don't know. I loved this story, just saying

great job! but erm.. with the scene before the wedding, i felt as if you should have added just a bit more to the making up scene with Jack & Joss.

Although i do hate you for making her choose Jack, it was quite a good story and um... yeha

:)

Nice chap... I think you need to proofread just a little more, cuz some sentences I didn't really get without reading twice. But nice chap.

Luv it! Funny, witty, awesome! :D

Ah! That was so good, btw your going to hate me for saying this but...I WANT COLE :( He is the bestest smexiest character, I know you said that you were writting another story on him but I really want him to be with joss. I really like her as a character and her and cole seemed so right. I like jack as a character don't get me wrong but I always wanted him to end up with addison and then cole and joss would be together :( OH WELL :) It was a really good story, I loved it even though the guy I wanted to win didn't. THe story was realy good, I think you are a really talented author

thanks for finishing this story and making it great

-Kristen (A.k.a Fiction-fan-4eva)

:D

i just read this all and I love it. I definitely enjoyed the second part better, a lot more passion. Normally I would have cheered for the Cole character to get the girl but like you said Jack is just so perfect and I did not want him heart broken. I approve of the ending immensely!

Loved this chapter! Just one thing that bugged me a lot: When doctors find a "tiny lump" in your breast that turns out to be cancerous, the majority of the time they do surgery and then DON'T follow up with chemo because it's unnecessary (i.e. the surgery took care of it – this is assuming that the cancer hasn't spread, in which case it would not be only "a tiny lump"). And they especially don't plan surgery AND chemo afterwards unless the cancer has spread; they do the surgery and then assess the results and their options from there.