Ah! Okay. *lets out a calm breath*...

I know that I'm probably near the end of this story since I see there's an Author's note for chapter 31. but i just got to say omg! I love this story! and omg. this chapter...i was so relieved jack forgave her! i want them to be together!

okay sure i admit, i liked cole in the first part of this story. love the motel and all those scenes and i wished that more could have happened with them when they were 17. but then you made him leave and then you started part 2 which picks up after a total of 7 years! and then i found myself loving jack and not much of a cole fan though yes i part of me still likes him. but i want jack! i want her to be with jack! okay. now im going to read the next chapter which says its the epilogue...im so stoked!

I'm sorry. I just finished reading your story and couldn't help but be confused about Cole! Did he really love her? Sometimes.. I dont think it was love he felt for her.. Just the way he answers Jack so lazily and nonchalantly during the confrontation like he didnt give a damn irked me. Sigh. Good thing she ended up with Jack though. I just dont like how Cole was portrayed to have less feelings than he acutally had for Joss is all..

I liked this chapter! :) Especially tha part where Cole tightened his arms around Joss!

hey! Whats up? Ok so I know this might be like a really and I mean REALLY late review, you know with this story being published like so long ago and all that... or maybe im just wrong and crazy and yeah you might get the idea if your still reading this review ... i dont blame you if you dont, which you wouldnt know if you'd stop reading it hm interesting... ok anyways leaving my weird self behind I have to say I LOVE THIS STORYY! I'm like rooting for both sides cause like Jacks so cute and what not while Cole dissapeared and like is soo hot and mysterious and gorgeous *sigh* I'm hopeless i know (:

so yeah now... i should probably go and eat supper but my family will have to wait a few more minutes until i get this review right ( my mom's going to kill ... oh well , for a good cause right?) And i probably be reading the next few chapter to know whats going to happen but yeah ill have to calm myself down until after supper ... well that sucks

ok so now really on to the review part. I can feel it in my bones that shes going to chose Cole i just know it... expect another review in the ending chapter (: and well its kinda sad cuase im rooting for both team, mean i know i just cant make up my mind but whatever in some alternate story universe she will end up with jack or something and like yeah... i forget what i was going to write now. oh right! m dont kill me ok? what exactly is C2? (: it seems cool and all but yeah. Cause if its what i think it is then my friend, Isa, the one who got into reading these stories and the one im going to blame on my will for making me raise my expectations to high, hence me not getting married, like EVER! Wants to befriend these people so that she can read and fantasize with their characters and what not... that probably didnt make sense... it tends to happen a lot ok so yeah i think i wrote down everything. Thank you for this story

love,

camila ( crazy girl who loves both guys)

ps. Thought you should know you have a fan in South America (:

and sorry for like bad spelling and what not (:

Hello!

So far, I really like the story, and I can tell that its going to get a lot more interesting, and I can't wait to see what finally happens!

One point that bothers me a bit is the generalizations relating to gay men. I happen to be friends with quite a few gay men, and none of them are good at fashion or makeup "because" they are gay. I know its a minor detail, but I think its a bit offensive that you judge ALL gay men in a few words.

Otherwise, keep up the great work!

-Eva

Congratulations, you managed to completely ruin the story with the ending. Bravo.

WHY? I'm sobbing my heart out for Cole. Not really, but I'm really heartbroken for him. ): I was rooting for him all the way. ;) After he was out of her life, dragged back in, then out again? You should write an alternate ending with her getting together with Cole instead. xD Oh well. Now I"m going to look for his story! xD

Just so you know, arranged marriages don't only happen in India, they happen in Bangladesh, Sri Lanka, Pakistan, HALF OF BLOODY AFRICA!

I pretty much hate all the characters in this story EXCEPT for Joss. Why is EVERYONE she meets so mean and cruel to her? Why all the torture? Does she have NO allies or friends? If I were her, I'd leave, skip town, run away, the hell with whatever contract her parents signed... oh and I'd bitch-slap Lydia on my way out the damn door.

I'm kinda upset D; I think i fell in love with Cole :') Amazing Story Though :D

whats coles' story's name?

I wan her with cole :( oh well D:

I WANT HER WITH COLE P IT DECIDED. AWWHH AT LEAST SHE'S HAPPY THOUGH. Right to much cap locks. Oh there's a new chapter

NO GR

No suspense for me P