Reviews for Sleeping with the Enemy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT JOB...NICE STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story so far. It has a lot of promise. It's hard to say whether or not this one is going to get really good, seeing as all it really is is the exposition. I hope your next chapters will live up to your first one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was wonderful :) Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() definitely cool talk about embarrassing parents...lolz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha. I love your story and I hope you update soon. I really want to see what other cruel jokes Lydia plays on them. Everything was good for me. Two thumbs up. But one question. What are lofahs? I like the length too. Not super unbearably long but not like super short where it gives no info. Wish I had more consturctive criticism but I think it has amazing potential. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha that's so freaking amazing! i love it! can't wait for the next chappie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aiyo...why does it say the story is completed T.T i thought it was a oneshot...are there more to this? it's quite interesting D hope to read more!..if theres more |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh. this is so interesting! It's pretty funny how his mom put a box of condoms on his pillow. |