|Reviews for Smile|
| J. F. Landshoft chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Ok, first of all, aw! The sweetness!
Second of all, this is actually a really good poem, and strangely, says exactly what i was thinking last night... Are you stalking me?
But seriously, this is a really good poem, write some more, I need my fix!
| Daiysis chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I like it. It's simple but somewhat haunting and melancholic at the end. The beginning was so hopeful and playful until the thoughts got filled with anxiety. Nicely done