cool cool i'm telling every one i know to read your story. but only if thats okay with you i mean my friends are a prtty ok bunch. oh wait almost all of them are losers but still you say that you wanted people to read your tell me and i'll tell them. everyone in my school needs some help. your story might fix them.

i read this when i was half asleep so if you don't understand any of it that's fine.

great so far i read the other reviews. gays uh? intersting. (sorry for the spellig

least favorite chapter so far i think it's because matt wasn't in it.

oh god i'm addicted to it but ir's worst them the normal addiction it's like the best coke i've ever tasted, sorry if thats still!

in my personal opinion i loved the story line. i've read books my entire life. and your writing is better than alot of the authors i've read out of.i'll keep reading and review. only if you find them not annoying.

I don't agree w/ homosexuality, and your story is getting repetitive. I'm afraid i'm not a very good choice for your Beta, sorry. :)

I am reading this! Haha. I promise.

So far, aside from some small spelling mistakes that can be easily fixed, there's really nothing wrong with this story. I think you need to give out a little more information on the characters, and smaller things like just decribing different environments and such, but all in all, great so far. I'll keep reading whenever I can :)

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woah this reminds me of Twilight, cus Kain has tempting blood nd his hero dude's a vampire. This is really awesome!

woah dude, taht was frekin awesome! im a bit upset taht teh villains all died right there but they'll get replaced at some point

“It‘s my toast now. I named it ‘Heaven Toast.’ Screw you.” - omg, you have no idea how hard that line had me laughing out loud. Good one.

~Chez~

eep! Yay! Squee! -insert another random otomatopoeia-!

I'm sorry, your story makes me hyper. XP Just like any good story or book. So yay!

To the next chapter

~Chez~

So, did they have sex, or not? That confuses me. lol

Also, you said in your profile that you had some 'scenes' with Kain and Matt that you would distribute if you were asked? I'll ask . . . . . lol.

~Chez~

Eep, I almost didn't reveiw, it's just so tempting to go on . . . . .

And wow, that chick does sound like a whore. idk why, but I see her wearing black and red. I'm probably wrong though. I blame her name. rawrg. hehe. So, onto the next chapter.

~Chez~

Rozalyn is such a pretty name, with a very unique spelling.

-Two thumbs up-

Things are becoming more complex now. YAY! I don't really have much else to say.

~Chez~

Aww, poor Kain. He's so very frustrated.

Nice chapter though. I really can't see anything wrong with it.

~Chez~