Reviews for Save Me
Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
"runaway" should be run away. :P

"Can anybody here my plea" the here there should be hear.

I like the line "to runaway and hide / to not have to face the truth that I'd been cast aside". It flowed and rhymed lovely-ly and the word choice there brought out the emotions in simple clarity.

The entire poem has a nicely-flowing sing-song feel to it. It's very sad, though. If you ever need a friend, feel free to email me and we can talk any time :(

-Jesse

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