Reviews for How I Write Haiku
BellaEzrebetFang chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Haha, well put.

I love this!
windy girl chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Funny. The last line was a nice (and somewhat crude) image.

fatbird33 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
fantastic idea for a haiku!
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I adore your last line ;) It's a nice bit of humor, and as a haiku writer I can really relate.

I'm not sure whether what you were doing with the punctuation. You used that one comma, but didn't use any other punctuation. I'd suggest either using it fully or not using it at all to avoid confusion.

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