Reviews for Unconvinced
WishIWasAnEagle chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
eilish...

I really thought you had gotten over cutting and depression and pain and dying and hiding and all that sort of sad, sad things.

PLEASE TELL ME ITS NOT TRUE!
Scrolled chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I love this. Very deep actually and I know so many who could fit the role... I love how it turns back on her in the last line.
Kirrithian chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
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A nice bit of freestyle peotry, with good imagery. I found the last couple of lines to be a bit short out of place- maybe expanding it a little would help, and getting more contrast between the rest of the poem and the last line might improve it.

But, as I said, a good bit of freestyle.

Keep Writing.

-Kirrithian