|Reviews for Unconvinced|
| WishIWasAnEagle chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
I really thought you had gotten over cutting and depression and pain and dying and hiding and all that sort of sad, sad things.
PLEASE TELL ME ITS NOT TRUE!
| Scrolled chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I love this. Very deep actually and I know so many who could fit the role... I love how it turns back on her in the last line.
| Kirrithian chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
A nice bit of freestyle peotry, with good imagery. I found the last couple of lines to be a bit short out of place- maybe expanding it a little would help, and getting more contrast between the rest of the poem and the last line might improve it.
But, as I said, a good bit of freestyle.