Aaw poor Tony :( Oh and poor Eddie since I assume she's about to crush his hopes for their relationship. Great chapter, please update again soon :) And I really do hope that more people start reviewing soon!

Okay so that chapter was wonderful :) you may be wondering where I've been but I was ill recently and now I have loads of work to catch up on. With all of that going on; January hasn't been the best month so I've been saving reading this chapter for a really rainy day :) I seriously love this story and I actually don't understand why people won't review, because it is so good and the characters are really well-developed. This leads me to conclude that after reading each chapter, readers are so impressed that they are speechless and therefore cannot think of any words to review :) So anyway...more soon? Please?

Hey! I'm reviewing your story, haha. Well, so far, the story seems a bit... dry. Maybe inject more of Tony's feelings? Describe more about her feelings, rather than just saying that she's feeling excited. Something like that? Oh and you wrote - by accident I think - snug instead of smug in the last part of the chapter about Mel's smile. I'm definitely going to read the other chapters when I have time, okay? Hope this helps!

Lol caught by the dad- what a moodkiller! But I'm glad there was a kiss after all that sexual tension , more soon? x

Yay! I love that Eddie was jealous, that was so cute! Great update :) the music part sounds really cool

Ooh wow, good chapter! Loved the band thing, and Tony's outfit sounds kick-ass!

Great chapter :), sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I've just had so much to do! But seriously this story is really good :)

I liked the update :) I think you illustrated really well the differences between Eddie and Tony. Eddie's parents sound really screwed up. More soon?

Oh wow, you're story is really interesting, I'm going on to the next chapter now! :)