Reviews for The Best Woman
JFJD chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
The opening paragraph was great! The first sentence cracked me up. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
Just saying chapter 28 . 12/31/2012
Ending left so much to be desired. So rushed, doesnt meet the quality of your previous chapters...just saying
Xioaxa chapter 28 . 8/13/2012
Good story. I enjoyed it. Didn't expecct the end thou. I was surprised! I can't remember a story I've read here where the main characters didn't end up together. I felt sad for Wally (almost cried), but then again you don't always get what you want.
Ceitsme chapter 28 . 8/5/2012
So sad whhhyyyy! I wish she didn't choose Stephan
Cheese chapter 28 . 7/20/2012
I liked this story, it made me smile
khanyi chapter 28 . 6/10/2012
Wow!*in tears*,I didn't expect her to end up with Stephen(wish he was the bad guy),but I'm glad that it ended the way it did,,she deserved all the happiness..thank you:)
Carzilla888 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
That is so cute she said "Cause I hate it" then he says "I'm gonna call you Fran" that had to be the cutest moment in fiction history
Butterflies831 chapter 28 . 7/22/2011
what a beautiful ending and i know that wally will find love..tragic beginning for both of them but in the end it will be worth because they will be with the one that love and sometimes their are relationships like this in real life where you may have the childhood friend that you fell in love with but didnt notice you till yrs later but in the end you moved because the reason you were put into each other lives was not to be lovers but to have someone intertwined with your life so you will always know that their is someone out there that love you beside your family. great story and i admit i had a lone tear come down my cheek when i finish bittersweet but i know stephen and frankie will be happy and wally will find love again
Butterflies831 chapter 22 . 7/22/2011
the best chapter of all and im not just saying this because of the lemon ;)..lol but this is where they finally took that "step" in their relationship and you wrote it very beautiful and how anyone would want to picture there first time and its also why stephen basically told frankie that he's in love with her and will be with her till the end of time..cant wait to see what happens next
Butterflies831 chapter 19 . 7/22/2011
this chapter was sooo good. i dont like that wally is getting cocky and thinking that just because him and frankie have a 20 yrs relationship that he will win when in the end its going to come back to burn and i hope it does and while i was reading this the song that i was think about was this song by Beyonce called "Best Thing You Never Had" cuz Frankie will always be the "girl that got away" for Wally and he will know that and i cant wait to see what stephen does with frankie because i was so happy that he finally admit his feelings told Frankie and she did for him and i will be the head cheerleader for them in rooting for their relationship. because i believe that stephen will make frankie feel loved and wanted and alot more and he already showed that she was beautiful and took her out of her shell and make her have more confidence in herself and im happy for that. great chapter again and i cant wait to read the rest..i just had to leave a review for this chapter
U broke ma heart chapter 28 . 7/12/2011
I hate stephan stupid wanker!why has this story make so sad i hAte it im sorry..a4give me but wally makes me want to cry like jusst suck!
U.broke ma heart chapter 14 . 7/12/2011
Why..i dont like u anymore meanie!
What the hell chapter 28 . 7/12/2011
This sucks..i mean the whole point of reading fic is 2 come out of reality but thanks 2 u sobs u just brought me back..Wally hell no why!i hate u 4 writing such a good sad story..it made me sad...why man..i hate stephan he a gay bastard...i so fricken fustrated becuz of u...i love wally if u don't love ur own character pass him 2 me i will give him a happy ending...cries so hard
AJ Taylor chapter 28 . 6/30/2011
I loved this story it went a little out of the norm by having her end up with Stephen but I enjoyed him as the great teddy bear boyfriend that he turned out to be. He so reminds me of my bf.
katiethematey chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
i have read this three times, but i didnt have an account. i love this story!
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