|Reviews for Memories in the Attic|
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
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I like how you used the attic to symbolize hiding your memories, because it makes so much sense. People store things in the attic, why not memories? I did have issues, though, with the rhythm, because it got thrown off in so many places. Maybe look over this again, read it out loud, and see how it sounds?