Reviews for Mermaids
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
I'm not a big fan on capitalizing the first letter of each line since it's one big sentence. I did like the piece though, it flowed well & was different. I also liked the alliteration in the end.
Lime-Cat chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I really like this piece because it has such stunning imagery.

Another thing I liked was the last line because it sounds so beautiful, it's sad, if you know what I mean.


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