|Reviews for Come to Terms|
| You Don't Need To Know My Name chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
well the computer is telling me to submit a well rounded critique so i will...
I'ts very good, It sounded very serious at first but then you broke the tension.
Using a peron's name (erica) kind of brought me out of the story you were telling because you didn't use any other names.
But other than that...
very nice sarah.
| underneaththesmile chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
oh! really cool...and descriptive! I
| Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I love how realistic and believable this is; it's so easy to envision.
The spontaneous descriptions of garage sale items really add to the feel of it, I think, a reminder that it's really happening, that the moment is tangible and more than just an emotion.
It really makes me wonder what exactly has happened, what line has been drawn... but I can appreciate the mystery (:
Also, you had one typo, "stnads" .. which I'm sure probably meant "stands"