Reviews for The Owl
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
i like it. it kinda reads like a folk tale in a way, especially with that first stanza.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Review Marathon! (If you're confused, there's a link on my profile.)

I like this idea, because it's a lot more sinister than I'm used to thinking of in an owl. It's interesting. I'm not sure about describing the owl as a bird of prey, though...I guess technically it might be, but the comparison is still throwing me off a little.
intensity chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Hmm your concept is lovely. I'm not sure I think of the owl as a bird of prey though. i was expecting a poem more on the lines of an owl bringing the call of death, so i was slightly disappointed. I love this concept though, I wish you would work on it.