Reviews for Flashlight In My Pocket
sentimental. semi-mental chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
"At least Mitch doesn't rape and pillage and commandeer young virgins for their unsoiled hymens."

This is probably the gazillion time I've read this story, and I still love it, if for that line alone. (And plenty of other memorable quotes, i assure you.) But that lines always gets me. I actually even used it once, when speaking to a principal.

"So, kissing the kid was like tonguing Marie... but oh what a difference!"

You kidding me. I'm pretty partial to incest (I don't actively look for it, usually avoid it, but don't really care), but i think that line made me continue after The Reveal.

I think I had more to say, but as I got distracted, I have no idea what it was. So thanks for the read. Your stories are very enjoyable.
AKhwab chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
My first guy on guy action. Wasn't expecting it. But you aren't bad. It was quite good but I failed to get the humour.
polar.amity chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Yes! Yes! Yes! I loved this! It was short and sexy and funny and perfect. Thank you.
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
well, that was fun. thanks for posting. really unique and personable characters here. great job!
Aria657 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Lol, I usually don't like incest, even if they are step brothers or whatever, but I'll make an exception for this one! I loved it! I don't really know what to think about his dad since Grimm's perspective is biased... But great job!
xXMoonlitRoseXx chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
no-ones-puppet chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Is it bad that I think Grimm is a cutie for how he acts at the park? I think not. Am I insane that I think the fact that Michael is cute for being inept when dealing with making out with Grimm? Possibly... But I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one. And lastly should I be afraid for my sanity when I consider you a brilliant author? Definitely not! Lol. :)
MissFunnyMonkey chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
"stick, not slick" That is so true, thank you for pointing that out. Drives me nuts.
Pendal chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Ok This story is the BOMB! I swear it was hot and funny. And that last line was to die for. I loved your characters and wish that I could see more of them. I really liked your main character. I loved his whole description.
bronsautracks chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
MAN that's classy.

so i have this thing about only adding completed stories to my favorites, because how do you know you like it if you don't know the ending right?

this ending was effing perfect.

this story is effing perfect. incest isn't really my kink or whatever but
Kerophile chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
I can't believe it! I really, really can't! This... this was COMPLETELY up my alley. I mean, fucking JACKPOT'd. (Quite frankly, it sounds like something I'd write.) The half-but-competent incest (at first, when I realized The Kid wasn't Grimm's father, I was disappointed because, goddamnit, I was expecting incest), the "ya"s and elided present participle endings and the "fuckin'"s, which, might I say, are my personal favorites. "Fucking' almost never leaves my mouth, in any form. The redneckocity. Hahah. And that Grimm bro's got quite a mouth on him.

Just... ugh, I really liked the characters. It reminds me of a more extreme version of myself (because I CANNOT control my facial expressions very well at ALL) and a funnier version fa sho. Usually that first-person/sardonic/asshole role writer kids nowadays like so much is overplayed and hyperbolized and really damned unnecessary, but it was Goldilocks'd just right in this. And realistic! Grimm noticing all these ordinarily "unattractive" things about Michael - the Rosacea, his elbows, the hunt-'n'-search for fur.

This all calls for an emoticon.


/checks "[ ] Add Story to Favorites"
Kia Zi Shiru chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
the dialogue was hard to follow from time to time but i loved it anyway
SerialXLain chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
I normally HATE characters like Grimmypoo, but since I've decided to love you in a creepy way, I read it anyway and did like it. Aren't you just the luckiest person EVER to get a review from ME! (Yeah, right. But I can still pretend I'm special, damn it.)

"Mom beat me in public and people cheered and nearly slapped the woman who tried to stop her." I loled...because everyone always wants to see that when they go to the grocery store. Or at least I do.

Haha. You said hobbit toes.

“…I went cross-eyed.” lulz...

I love half brother stuff...
Amindaya chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
This is so Amazing (capital A)! How are you so talented, huh? Tell me!

Mitch is such a total, bona fide asshole. I LOVE it! And Michael being a sweetie (who, on top of eveything else, tackles guys to get some kisses, which is definitely the best kind of sweetie) balances him really well. This was hilarious and indelicate and everything made of awesome and wowness. Thanks so much!
magalina chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
loved it :)
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