Reviews for Unwanted
mia aurora chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
finish this up..this is great ! :D
sweetneverinnocent chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
Really good story. Just sucks that you won't FINISH IT!
xXliarliarXx chapter 5 . 2/12/2010
Update soon darnit! Check out my story When The Sun Goes Down. :)
midnight84118 chapter 5 . 10/3/2009
i was a little confused by this story but gret job
ChristianAngel01 chapter 5 . 9/18/2009
whoa that was interesting update!
blooy fangs chapter 5 . 8/17/2009
finish it so i can know what happens neax
XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 5 . 8/13/2009
FreeToDream chapter 5 . 8/12/2009
Ok, I really like it so far, please don't abandon it! It's really good, and your writing is really good, love it! DON'T STOP! lol
YRUSTILLHERE chapter 4 . 3/9/2009
I really like this story; this chapter was great! Please continue!
gallowsCalibrator chapter 4 . 2/2/2009
It's an awesome story so far. Can't wait for you to update!

PoeticPersonality2012 chapter 4 . 1/15/2009
I like it!

I just came across this and it is realy good.

You should update soon.

static.mind chapter 4 . 12/1/2008
That was fabulous.

OMG! You have to update soon.

I love the concept of only higher class Vampires drink Human blood.

Backwards werewolf! That is funny and sad, Poor Bryce.

Ok, update soon.
RyAnn Leigh chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
I do like this chapter. I especially like the dialogue, and the witty exchange at the end of the chapter. I also like how we get a little insight to the ways of vampires, such as only the higher vampires can drink human blood or that Daisy has this ability to call the deer to her-and that she doesn't have to kill to eat.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this story is going and to see if there will be an exchange between her and the other vampires.

Keep up the good work!
Feblinhoi-BattlefieldOfTheDead chapter 4 . 11/3/2008
Aw! Thats so cute, and I can see why your beta likes it.

Keep up the good work!
LittleMissKissBang chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Really cool. Update more! Dying for something to read. Love the heart beat thing. Makes it a little more interesting. But what about the Wellingtons? If the one asked her to marry him then I think he'll come looking for her. Just my opinion anyway. Keep it up and post more soon.
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