Reviews for trying to find
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Loving the stream-of-consciousness. It's kind of an abstract poem, but I like it. Sometimes we need these types of poems. I like the idea of tickling time's feet. It's cute. Keep writing! :)
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/18/2008

really pretty

i like the way you worded the ocean and sky reflecting part. that was creative :]

and the ending was, i think, just...right.

thanks for sharing (:
Isca chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
"And somewhere above the spreading horizon, our slow motion dreams tickle time's feet." Great descriptive wording and imagery throughout! :)
gg. lass chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
this has beautiful imagery.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,

KDR chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
This is very pretty...I like it. :)