|Reviews for Cigaretteland|
| FantasmaLuna chapter 3 . 8/30/2008
Aww, poor Michelle! How dare that dirty little bastard hurt her like that! She's too cool to be hurt by anyone!
You rock, girl! Keepin rockin'!
| FantasmaLuna chapter 2 . 8/30/2008
Again, brilliant poetic language and I am totally LOVING Michelle! She seems so enigmatic and dreamy! I love her!
Vampire kisses for you!
| FantasmaLuna chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Good to see you again, Rosie! Sorry I could review earlier, but I've been away on holiday.
Anywho, great beginning! Brilliant poetic language and OMG, poor Michelle! Bless her cotton socks!
| Koki Enwai chapter 2 . 8/22/2008
Nice imagery, as usual.
But is it just me or did nothing happen in this chapter? It all felt like description. . .
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Shades Of Autumn chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Overwritten. There might have been a story underneath all that thick syrupy prose, but I lost the will to hang around and excavate it.
| Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
You have such a way with words, it's amazing. Great vocabulary. I absolutely loved the imagery of this. Everything felt so real. Description is definitely your best asset when it comes to writing.
Naturally, I really eager to read more of this.
Can't wait! :)