Reviews for Cigaretteland
FantasmaLuna chapter 3 . 8/30/2008
Aww, poor Michelle! How dare that dirty little bastard hurt her like that! She's too cool to be hurt by anyone!

You rock, girl! Keepin rockin'!
FantasmaLuna chapter 2 . 8/30/2008
Again, brilliant poetic language and I am totally LOVING Michelle! She seems so enigmatic and dreamy! I love her!

Vampire kisses for you!
FantasmaLuna chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Good to see you again, Rosie! Sorry I could review earlier, but I've been away on holiday.

Anywho, great beginning! Brilliant poetic language and OMG, poor Michelle! Bless her cotton socks!

Luv ya!
Koki Enwai chapter 2 . 8/22/2008
Nice imagery, as usual.

But is it just me or did nothing happen in this chapter? It all felt like description. . .

Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

- Koki
Shades Of Autumn chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Overwritten. There might have been a story underneath all that thick syrupy prose, but I lost the will to hang around and excavate it.
Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 8/18/2008

You have such a way with words, it's amazing. Great vocabulary. I absolutely loved the imagery of this. Everything felt so real. Description is definitely your best asset when it comes to writing.

Naturally, I really eager to read more of this.

Can't wait! :)

- Koki