Reviews for Lovers' Truth
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
This was beautiful, and had really great flow, though I did have a problem with the line, "Maybe we can share it." It just felt to me like a stop for some reason, even if that wasn't intended.
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
This is very sweet. It flows very well and it made me think of a letter sent from one lover to another...but maybe that's just how I saw it. As always, nice work with this, its very good and I enjoyed reading it.
Isca chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
"Loving dear, follow me. Our truth won't get away." I really liked this line. It stood out. It evoked such lovely emotion.
Imperia chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
this is beautiful. it's nice to think that love can be the end to all of our problems and you're right it's one of the hardest things to find. i'm not trying to be pessimistic i do see the value of love and have loved. maybe it's because i haven't found the right person that i say love is made out to be more grandiose than it is in real life. anyways great poem, i really enjoyed reading it.