Reviews for i wish it meant nothing to me
cassi crysta chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
I am totally envisioning this as if your talking about a child
Dear Author chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
It's been a long time since you wrote a poem. I'm saddened honestly. Ever since I found your work, it's inspired me so much... It's just... I wish I can just say, how much I appreciate your work. To give you a warm hug, to show you what I feel. I don't know if you'll ever read this. But you are talented, you write raw, and you bring out the emotions that other's are afraid to feel. I give you all the love in the world for that. Thank you for writing this. I wish you all the best, and all goodluck.
aphoon chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
i wish it meant nothing to me :(
YasuRan chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
There's a lot of meaning inscribed in these few short sentences. Being a lover of ambiguity, I just couldn't resist :)
Not An Account chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I love the background that you are alluding to.

Very well written!
growing-up chapter 1 . 10/12/2009

Good ending.
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
This was absolutely wonderful. So much is said in so few words and at the beginning things seem happy and sweet but then there is a complete change in the tone. & the ending is just lovely with, "“roses are red, darling,” I say, press a

Kiss to her nose, “and violets are blue”" perfect.
bahaghari chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
it began innocently, then tension builds as the speaker sings discordantly, and it suddenly grips you as the mother screams, then leaves you numb at the end of the song, and yet it's very brief.

i think it's cleverly put together - so much in just a small piece.

keep rockin'.
Love And Some Verses chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
The contrast of moods in this gives me chills. Very bittersweet and beautiful. Your writing is gorgeous.
HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
its been a while darling.

how have you been? i thought i gave you my email, though most probably wrong. if you still read these reviews, give me a shout out on my profile. i'm thinking of updating soon

take care, and, as always, beautiful poetry.
Little Miss Novella chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
there's something so sad about this poem :(
Eboniccinderella chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
I really love the last two stanzas...but i want to know, did you mean to say off-tune? If so, it's really compelling to think about...
synapse collapse chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
so, so gorgeous. i need to drop by more often.
x.Miss.Twiztid.x chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Awh. I think this is stunningly beautiful. It's sad and sweet and it captures your emotion perfectly.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
i LOVE this poem! no lie. it was flawless and extremely effective. for some reason i loved this line, "As I sing, off-tune and loud, to her

" perfection. and now i shall add this to my favs:)
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