Reviews for Hidden Rainbows
Wheresmyprince chapter 2 . 8/27/2008
can't wait for the next chapter
fluidwriter chapter 2 . 8/27/2008
I like the first chapter, but I couldn't read the second one. Why is it that you have the paragraphs bunched together? It makes it very hard to read and aggravates the reader. Maybe you can change that, perhaps?
sexposed chapter 2 . 8/27/2008
_ waitin for tha good stuff lol