Reviews for Just
DragonOwl chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Nice! This was really interesting to read!
dress chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Wow. This is seriously one of the best pieces of writing I've seen on this site. I love the way you write, and the way you managed to give the story a moral!
Jess chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
I seriously love this story! It was just so... surprised me because I guess I never really thought that people who get the jobs they have been working towards might not be happy. So this was kind of an eye-opener...
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Great job with the story! It's amazing! I love it :)
heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
dis is super coollllllllll i love it over nd out (:
loveofallthatisawesome chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
That was great! I especially loved how she didn't make him into a better person, she just reminded him of the person he used to be. I also love how you made them boyfriend/girlfriend without the whole dates, questioning, and awkward stuff in between. They're just together :D

Well, this was a great one-shot and I really enjoyed reading it :D
heytherehoyhoy chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
This was very nice - a good read - and very entertaining.
mussed chapter 1 . 5/22/2012

You don't know how much I relate to this and how much I'm afraid of being a 'just' person. Ugh. I can't really put into words what I'm thinking right now which sucks because it makes so much sense in my head. So yeah before I get sappy, thank you for writing this.
wasabi-angel chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Love the idea of "just" guys! Hate the fact that I might be becoming a "just" girl though, so thank you for opening my eyes :)
Aslin17 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
I read your story and at the bottom there was an ad for ties. Just had to laugh :)
WishBlade chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Aww, I like it! I never thought about 'just' guys before, but that's some thought ]
Lyssa O chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Oh, I lovelove this story! Theo's character voice is just so fresh I couldn't help but love him after the first sentence. You've successfully expressed the morale of the story through Theo, Avery, and their relationship. I loved Avery's character. She embodies the saneness found in those conglomerate scary-places that Theo almost lost himself in. Their match was portrayed very nicely. Your writing style is such a lovely read, and I found myself smiling through reading this. It's just the thing I needed after being drained with school and work. Your first two lines got me. Seriously. Then I read the rest and the rest's well . . . being horribly expressed in this review, haha.

Great job!
Artume chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Ha, I really liked it! A just guy...nice analogy. :) And Avery? Best Character ever!
Noni Veritas chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
I clicked on this one right after reading the quotes on your profile and I love how you adapted the quote. It worked wonderfully as a prompt and you made it your own. The characters were fun, quirky, and easy to relate to. Very real. It was a fun read, and I think the coffee/tea detail was a great addition to being "just". I don't know- I just loved when Theo asked for the tea selection. I could totally picture Avery's face. Thanks (again!) for the great read! chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I really liked this one. It was special. Very thought-provoking.

Loved it.
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