I gotta say I'm totally into the story, I like how the mom's a mythical fanatic and Luna's getting caught up in it all. And I may not be one for cliches but I definitely like the tension between Sara and her crony Arabelle. Every school's gotta have their stereotypical sluts. I just wish Luna would knock her in the face already lol

You might want to try and slow down a bit though, put a little more detail into it. You definitely had me confused at the part where talks to Luna. I understands he snaps(the bipolar-ness), but not what he was talking about with how she felt?

Can't wait to see what the key's for and whose at the door, update soon, so I can review again! :D

Tater

this is really good... a tad confusing but good