Reviews for A Penny for Your Thoughts
Edensong chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Fantastic! Loved the title, first off. I really like your writing voice, you conveyed your character's thoughts and emotions very well, and better yet, wove them into descriptions - "He beamed back with no hesitation, nothing hiding beneath the imperfect, one-of-a-kind little teeth that he would lose someday to make room for a standard set of orthodonture." Wonderful, keep writing!
PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Very good! I really liked the truth behind this piece. Your don't get paid for honesty, so why do it? This piece was so good, and so believable. Great job!