Ooh, this is brilliant! :) I like it. Very well-written, too.

Keep up your super-neat, very awesome and creative writing! :)

Story is so good... it's only downfall... is that it hasn't been updated in two years and the author has been inactive for years [.

LOVED IT!

Update! **please, please, please.

TG x

This is so good! Are you ever going to finish it?

G ah!

...erm... eh.. please update soon?:) *pleading puppydog eyes*

..like, now? :D

Taylor Yummy!:P

Mal Not bad either

Looking forward to the next chap. The charachters are weird and lovable. - Can't wait to read more about them!

So GO! Go write chapter three! GO, GO, GO! *waving pom-poms*

I love the fact you have jumped right into the story and not dragged it out like some.

Oh, damn you, such a cruel way to end a chapter, I need to know what happens damn it all, hehehehe.

JM

They kissed! ** Update please))

Nice chap.

Good story so far-hope you update soon! :)

i cant wait for next chapter please post it soon.

OMG. this story is freaking awesome! UPDATE SOON PLEASE :]

sara x

This. Is. AMAZING. I love your characters (especially Malachi D ). Can't wait to see how this goes!~Celestial Songbird

OH! Love this story! It's so good!

Oh gosh this is great! I just finished chapter 1. I really like the way you've built your characters. But who's the romance between? I'm confused now. Also, I really like how intelligently and fluent your writing style is. Good job! _