Is he dead or just forgot about her?

Aww, this was such a sweet little story. It's short, but it was still enough to make me love the characters and their relationship. I loved the touch with the coral ring. The ending was very sad, but it felt right. A lovely little story all in all.

OmiGAWSH!

I just want you to know that it takes alot to make me cry, the only other times was when my little kitty girl died (Sakkara) and when I watched titanic.

That was so well written! i ws in tears by the end of it! feel proud!

Did she ever meet him again?

Oh my god, can you make this into a two shot?

I know it sounods weird, but can you writ eon where they meet again?

It was amaaziinigg.

I don't know if you'll take my advice, but I'll just suscribe to story alert, just in case. [in case]

Very beautiful and sad.

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That’s so sad . . .

You should rewrite this into a book or something. Maybe she battles with him and he dies saving her? That would be neat. (Don’t if you don’t want to.) Really sad ending, though. I wonder what happened to Dylan?

This short story is amazing! Keep up the good work! I feel sorry for Marie.