wow. i love the emptiness it leave you.

Well, I'll say it's a poignant piece of work here. I guess it's pretty much on family tragedy than any other thing else. The first person view was very well done with the emotions being present. tbh tho, I think you can try to input more humane touches instead of pure hatred. The narrator's psychology is way too screwed up. In fact, I do find myself feeling more for her sister than her. I think you will do good in exploring more in depth on the narrator's mind and not just pure loathing. Well, that's all I can say. Sorry if I sound mean. Don't mean to. :( Anyway, thanks very much on your reviews for Wolfblood and hope to see more of them soon! Bye! :)